It's funny, I bet you could take any software dev and blind AB test a page written by a corporate manager and a page written by an engineer.
Here's something an engineer writes, loaded with facts:
"I got to the office and we had a huge panic going on, I immediately called our IT in US-2West and they reported on cascading box failures, I checked our load balancer via remote admin and indeed it was failing to. I called my IT managers and learned we had hard resetting in progress for the past 20 minutes with minimal impact on recovery."
Here's something an engineer writes, loaded with facts:
"I got to the office and we had a huge panic going on, I immediately called our IT in US-2West and they reported on cascading box failures, I checked our load balancer via remote admin and indeed it was failing to. I called my IT managers and learned we had hard resetting in progress for the past 20 minutes with minimal impact on recovery."
Totally missing from the article.